Philosophy consistencyPhil. cons. · 哲学一致性
8/10
The 9-slide rhythm reads as a single direction (Monocle Editorial)
from cover to close. chrome vocabulary stays in one
register: "A Talk · 2026.04.22", "Act II · 04 / 09",
"Page 06 · 金句". The drift is the kicker on
slide 5 — "Act II" is good, but the slide title "折叠"
is a one-character display word that competes with the Act number for
eyeballs. Worth tightening.
Visual hierarchyHier. · 视觉层级
7/10
Hero pages (1, 5, 7, 9) are textbook — display serif dominates,
kicker and meta-row recede. Body pages
mostly hold up: stat-cards on slide 2 use .stat-label
(mono small) → .stat-nb (serif large) → .stat-note
(sans body), three tiers, no collision. The miss is slide 3's
callout — its left-rule competes visually with the
.h-xl heading because both sit at the same x-coord
and similar weight. Eye doesn't know if to read heading-first or
quote-first.
Detail executionDetail · 细节执行
8/10
Magazine-grade in places — every .foot aligns
baseline-to-baseline across all 9 slides; .meta-row
uses one mono spec throughout (.16em tracking,
uppercase). Pipeline on slide 4 keeps perfect grid even when
column count drops to 3. Two real misses: (1) Slide 3 image-slot
uses aspect-ratio:16/10 but the placeholder text
inside is centered which makes it look hollow at viewport widths
≤ 1100px; (2) the dot-nav at the bottom overlaps the foot text
on slide 5 because the hero centered grid eats vertical space.
FunctionalityFunc. · 功能性
6/10
Keyboard / wheel / touch navigation works correctly inside the
host iframe (verified: ←/→/PageUp/PageDown all advance). ESC
opens the index overview, dot clicks register. Big miss is the
example ships without real images — slide 3 shows a
dashed .img-slot placeholder where a product
screenshot belongs, which is the right call for an example file
but means the user can't judge how the layout holds at full
fidelity. Second miss: iframe sandbox is
allow-scripts only in the example card, so the
WebGL background loads but the dot-nav inside the iframe takes
a click before keyboard nav captures focus.
InnovationInnov. · 创新性
5/10
Innovation is intentionally conservative — this is a port of
歸藏's guizang-ppt-skill, and the value proposition is
predictability, not novelty. The dual WebGL background
(Holographic Dispersion on dark, Spiral Vortex on light) is the
one earned moment; the cross-fade on slide-theme transitions is
subtle and well-timed. But everything else (layout vocabulary,
chrome / foot pattern, theme presets) is faithfully replicated
from the upstream. There is no "lean-forward" surprise that
makes a viewer screenshot a slide. For its declared purpose
(Monocle Editorial direction), this is appropriate. For an
AI demo-day deck, it's a missed opportunity.